Bass *death*.
This track started off alright, but there's a couple problems I have with it. Firstly is that opening melody; it goes for just one or two bars too long without any change in the composition. When the bass drum comes in it's two bars too late, and the clap didn't even give it some good headway. Secondly is the bass itself! It comes in and murders my headphones!! A little overdosed maybe?? My last problem with this track is that it's WAY too short. I started getting into it, and then it was over. (I was like... And then I serious'd.) Throw more stuff in there for me to listen to!
What synths are you using, by the way? They sound frigging hardcore. A bass guitar doing a melody in C major underneath those synths would probably elevate this song somewhere north of nirvana.